I still need…
EVERYTHING!!!
Images:
Film of my Grandmothers safe
Film of garbage out
Film of clothing?
Commercial Clips
Grandmother/Mother? Images or Film
Sound:
I don’t think that I will have any music. If I do, it would be an instrumental. Haven’t really gotten that far; first I guess, I need to get what I want to say.
Language:
Voice Over
Stacey said,
May 20, 2008 at 3:09 am
I think you have a nice full list of things you need to do. I hope you feel a little bit more clear now about your ideas then you did in class. (Don’t worry we all feel the same way!) I think your idea of sound is something that you could really work to your advantage especially with the whole old to new idea. What do you mean by film of garbage out? How are you going to show this? I deffinitely think the idea of showing a slight bit of a hand in the safe or something like that will make your grandmother’s safe more personal and effective to the audience.
mch0601 said,
May 20, 2008 at 3:53 am
I looks like you’ve got a good idea about what you need to get done. I think we all have a lot of work ahead of us to get these films done! What kind of commercial clips are you planning on using? were these goning old clips? new clips? or some of both? I think that the sound is a key feature here because it can help you tell your story. I dont know if I would use an actual song, just because of what we talked about today in class, but I would use voice overs, maybe you and your grandmothers voice. I think that would make it seem real to the audience.
vagelec625 said,
May 20, 2008 at 5:19 am
Amy,
I don’t think you need live footage of everything. I think you could use the internet as a resource. Maybe find a grandmothers hand on-line; it could even be a still image. I also think that you could just pick a few images like Kim said in class and focus on them (show them all in the beginning). And I agree with you, we all have so much to do before Thursday! I think you should narrow it down and only pick a few things to focus on, especially because we only have so much time. And I think voice overs would be helpful, but you could include some of the metaphors on the storyboard.
fulwilem said,
May 20, 2008 at 11:55 am
Amy–
You’ve got your “essay”–so now it’s time to think visually, metaphorically. Perhaps there’s a way that your images and film techniques could mirror your ideas about “old” things? Where will you include voicovers and what text will you write and record?
Megan
Katrina said,
May 20, 2008 at 12:55 pm
Amy-
I agree with you and I think if you use music it might take away from what you are trying to show the audience. I would also think about useing more voice overs than text boxs. The voice over is more personal and I think it would make your film more powerful. What would you say in your voice overs? Because I know what you had on your story board but it seemed like that was going to be to much and make your film to long.
Katrina
Sara said,
May 20, 2008 at 4:20 pm
i feel the same way you do! I still need everything. I kind of think that it may be impossible. haha I hope we get it all done! I think you have a good list going on though.